Insatiable for Nothing
She was
insatiable
Hungry
Always
longing
Ravenous
Always
wanting more
Starving
Always
yearning
Thirsty
Always
craving more
And yet
He gave her
little bits
of
nothing
But she always
asked
for
more.
Silence
Your silence
is
painful.
Each second
of
quiet
like a
pin prick
sticking
me
in places
I didn’t know
could
hurt.
Give me words,
my darling.
I ache for them all.
Your silence
is
torture.
Each moment
of
quiet
like
falling
down
without
any
ground
to
fall on.
Sweet write.
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So heartbreaking…
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The second one is very much an opening of emotion when silence is used as a barb or spear in a relationship, very poignant. The first is a nice rendering of that feeling of being in a relationship where there is a desire for more that is never met. Is the desire a greed to keep taking, or a relationship unfulfilled for other reasons. Great words for thought 🙂 Keep writing 🙂
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Thank you for your astute comment, David. I always look forward to how you interpret my work. Thank you for reading and your support. 🙂🙂🙂
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« He gave her
little bits
of
nothing »
Some people don’t know how to give properly I guess 👍👍
Loved how you described the very deep pain and suffer from the unspoken words…and it certainly hurts much more than the cruelest words 👌👌
Perfect dear poet as always, you play with the words perfectly ❤️❤️🐡🐡
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Thank you thank you thank you! I love words. I love playing with them. To be a grand story-teller someday…ah, now that is a gift beyond words. ❤️❤️🐡🐡❤️❤️🐡🐡❤️❤️🐡🐡
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You’re a perfect maestro with words just be sure of that 👌👌❤️❤️❤️
This someday can be today and so easily 🐡🐡😊😊
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Thank you. Humbly, I thank you. ❤️❤️❤️
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So beautiful. Your verbal poetry. Tempting and wonderful.
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Thank you John. I appreciate your comment and kind words, always. ❤️❤️❤️
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please listen and read the words of a talented writer.
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Thank you so much! ❤️❤️❤️
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