Loved these lines so much! You’re certainly a queen and shouldn’t be treated less than this! And it’s better be broken and alone than being with someone who doesn’t know our value or neglect us…It’s perfect! 👌👌👏👏💖
Lovely pieces, I like the idea of growing new wings, and in the second piece ‘at least I am free’ Both pieces focussing on mistreatment and the turning points in each are different but move to freedom. Good writing, good voice. Will the singing poetess return for us?
Thank you, David. I feel like I lost my nerve a bit with the singing. I’ve written another song but not ready to sing it yet. Thank you for your comment and support. 💗
Hi. Wanted to stop in and tell you, “Nicely done.”
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Thank you! 😊
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Loved these lines so much! You’re certainly a queen and shouldn’t be treated less than this! And it’s better be broken and alone than being with someone who doesn’t know our value or neglect us…It’s perfect! 👌👌👏👏💖
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🤗🤗🤗Thank you! 💖💖💖
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Wonderful poetry dear Poet.
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Thank you John. 🤗
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You are welcome dear Poet.
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Lovely pieces, I like the idea of growing new wings, and in the second piece ‘at least I am free’ Both pieces focussing on mistreatment and the turning points in each are different but move to freedom. Good writing, good voice. Will the singing poetess return for us?
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Thank you, David. I feel like I lost my nerve a bit with the singing. I’ve written another song but not ready to sing it yet. Thank you for your comment and support. 💗
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This was lovely. No woman should ever be put in te position of being a pawn.
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Thank you. 💗
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